A Slap In God's Face

A Slap In God's Face

A Poem by Sirius King


 A Slap In God’s Face

(Poem by Serenus)


Blessed with gifts

That you don’t even use

God gave you legs to walk

 But you refuse to move

 

To express and talk

He gave you a voice

But when it's time to speak up

You’re silent by choice

 

Wasting all of your talents and potential

Squandering your chance to be influential

What if it all was taken away?

Where would you be today?

  

You have all you need

To thrive and maintain

But yet and still

 You sit and complain

 

Concerned with the treasures

That others hold

Adoring their gifts

And neglecting your own

 

Chasing after the material

The silver and gold

Forgetting about the spiritual

Your mind and your soul

 

How dare you reject

The Father's amazing grace

The ultimate disrespect

…A Slap in God's Face



© 2012 Sirius King


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I dedicate this poem to all those ignorant people I left behind in my neighbor before I when to college. Every day I watched people like this, I'm talking very talented people throwing their lives away for fast money, hoes, and clothes. I go back to see them from time to time and they still have not amounted to nothing.

The image in the beginning is hilarious before reading the poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

believe me, i know what you are speaking of very well!...i thought the pic would bring a little humo.. read more



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At first I was hesitant to read this, but I wish now I had reviewed sooner.
Thank you for writting such a powerful piece that everyone should read.
A write well done.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Summer'sBreeze

11 Years Ago

Yes, it was actually because I've seen so many "God hate" crap from people.
But this was a sl.. read more
Sirius King

11 Years Ago

we've all done that. even with the simple gifts, like waking up in the morning... a lot of ppl don't.. read more
Summer'sBreeze

11 Years Ago

Exactly, and no problem. :))
Damn were you talking to me? But no seriously.. yeah.. definately living that one on some levels. Good joint and wake up call for those not using their abilities. I dig your writing style. Keep doing what you do fam. 1

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

I'm talking to all of us, including me 1st! lol...yes its time to wake up and use what God has given.. read more
Powerful and so true

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx!
D E E P. And this was needed to be said. Great job !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thank you :-)
nice work...funny how some people have the gift or have the gifts and all they do is complain, or as you say squander them away...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

i actually was speaking to myself while writing most of this poem, but i knew other ppl would get so.. read more
Sadly, it's very true.

You did a great job. In your last stanza, you need to add an apostrophe. Other than that I see no mistakes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thanx!
error fixed
Powerful! I love this. I don't see any room for change at all... perfect as it is.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

thank u :-)
Absolutely! Excellent read and write. You rock, Serenus!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

11 Years Ago

lol thank u!!!

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