Evolution

Evolution

A Poem by Sirius King


Evolution

(Poem by Serenus)


Many people don’t believe in evolution

But I’m determine to evolve

Then I’ll start a revolution

And get the masses involved

 

We’ll spread the message like pollution

Love will be our cause

Hate needs a substitution

Or else- nothing will be solved

 

We will be immune to evil

A sickness that can

 Never again take control

No more hatred or animosity

It’s like cancer to the soul

 

No more violence or war

One day we’ll look back in horror

And wonder, what was it all for?


One day we’ll rise above the fray…

And be disgusted

By the way we behaved…

 

Racism

Sexism

Slavery

The holocaust

War of religions

Terrorism

Torture…

How could we have been so lost?


As a people

We don’t have a choice

But to evolve

Or else-

As a people…

We will all dissolve.

 

 

 

 



© 2012 Sirius King


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Even negativity evolves a soul, due to all the 'bad' events in my past I evolved into who I am. The revolution is already happening, all across the world there are riots and protests as people discover their voices. We must maintain that momentum. I also think a great deal of people are already disgusted by humanities actions. Your line 'We'll spread the message like pollution' makes the message sound negative and detrimental to change. Otherwise this is a great and genuine piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

6 Years Ago

thanx for the review... i agree i may have to find a better word
Karl Woof Junior

6 Years Ago

EXACTLY!!!!! better words this is it not better houses and cars not more sedating media or faster ph.. read more
Sirius King

6 Years Ago

gotcha lol



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Wow this is activist poetry, I truly respect this! The ideal of progress is one of the last enlightenment values that I think can empower the youth to change the world. Because 40 year olds with fat cushy jobs or security (with the need to provide for families) aren't going to change the world, sorry.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

6 Years Ago

most ppl are too comforable in their lazyboyz to take a stand on anything, but i believe there is en.. read more
Well written my friend, riddle me this how does one defeat hatred in a society without first being able to identify it? how and what degree do we evolve to without revolving to a prime idea of superiority?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Karl Woof Junior

6 Years Ago

agree to disagree trees grow not only from sun and sprinkles but the dead too self hatred is great w.. read more
Sirius King

6 Years Ago

Overcoming self doubt and insecurities is a great thing, that's growth

but when your se.. read more
Karl Woof Junior

6 Years Ago

difficult to determine the meanings behind this my friend were tumbling down the rabbit hole on this.. read more
Review for Change the World Comp
Even negativity evolves a soul, due to all the 'bad' events in my past I evolved into who I am. The revolution is already happening, all across the world there are riots and protests as people discover their voices. We must maintain that momentum. I also think a great deal of people are already disgusted by humanities actions. Your line 'We'll spread the message like pollution' makes the message sound negative and detrimental to change. Otherwise this is a great and genuine piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sirius King

6 Years Ago

thanx for the review... i agree i may have to find a better word
Karl Woof Junior

6 Years Ago

EXACTLY!!!!! better words this is it not better houses and cars not more sedating media or faster ph.. read more
Sirius King

6 Years Ago

gotcha lol

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