Where are you? (Poem)

Our days go by with hesitation

When we ride on the train at the station

We look at each other, our lips moving but don't talk

When we arrive at our destination, out of the train we walk

Days later, I receive a friend request on Instagram from you

Then, you don't ride the train anymore and just leave out of the blue

Oh gosh! Where did you go!

I actually loved you and you were so beau

Your eyes glittered like diamonds in the sky

That you made me even fly so high!

Our days now go by being restful

Not giving enough reasons to be zestful

Just one question always sparks in my mind...

Where are you honey... where are you?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfect use of words and thoughts. The words danced to perfect meaning. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Coyote!! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[heartspeaks]

That you made me even (EVEN ME) fly so high!
the lines are beautiful...the restlessness the missing and wait all can be clearly seen and felt...
like a poetry in motion.. well done good work...

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you heart!! :)

[Tina H.W.]

I love this. I could picture the whole scene; two people just starting to notice each other...and then my heart thumped when I read (I assume it's a girl) just vanished! It's uplifting and yet so sad. I loved it! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you loved it :)

[Tina H.W.]

It was my pleasure! :)

[B]

I must say i have been victim to one too many train, buses, metro crushes lol
I am not sure what it is ..... but they taper off so fast
maybe thats why its so sweet

Love this piece

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you! :) Lol

[kayamu]

This reminded me of a scene from Swiss Army Man. There's always that one person that you see all the time but never have the courage to say anything. It's a beautiful poem.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much!! :)

[Maria]

so original....I liked it very much

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Such a lovely piece of romance, well penned from the beginning till the end its is very good to read..
Well done.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Farhan! :)