Freedom (Poem)

Freedom (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer


Image result for birds flying during dusk


Dusk comes rapidly
Mocking jays flying freely
Enjoying freedom

© 2017 Mr.Writer


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freedom in expression, freedom in nature...captured so positively in this beautiful haiku.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

I agree with Yumna, your haiku's are quite divine, short and wonderful. I loved this, it provoked a feeling of the day ending sweetly

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

Freedom,...And it's feel free poem..I liked it..:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Oh this is a nice one. I think you're better at haikus than with the longer poems you write. Loved the image as well.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

You are quite adept at the haiku style, my friend... It is a form of writing that always seems to elude me... Well penned...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

Bravo! What a lovely haiku. I'm enjoying your new found love for haiku. :3

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Love the haikus, short and sweet. Also, I LOVE the picture.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Guest

49 Years Ago

Very nice to read. Beautiful imagery.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

Short poetry and true use of words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Guest

49 Years Ago

Guest

49 Years Ago

You like haiku then. I could see a good image on this one. Write more. :) I need more feeling and rhythm.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Guest

49 Years Ago


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Added on April 21, 2017
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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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