A second...

A second...

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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Weird, right?

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"Can I borrow your pencil for a second?"
When that second turns into a minute...
That minute turns in an hour
That hour into hours
Or those hours into a day?
And that day into never.


© 2017 Mr.Writer



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Reading this poem strikes me odd that it doesn't happen more often, what am I talking about you ask? Poets thinking alike. Here is a copy of a poem I wrote more than 40 years ago which shows the great minds think alike principle. But first your poem has good depth Standing Ovation! I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
LIVING YESTERDAY
Onward turn the page of time
Leaving yesterday a useless rhyme
That I remember emotionally entwined
Madding memories I have of her
And how I can never really be sure
I cry for the times that once were
And the things that might have been
If only I could do them again
Would that be such a real sin
If minutes turn into hours
And hours turn into days
And tomorrow is today
Then why am I living yesterday


Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much Bear!!! :)
I really liked your poem, it is very well worded the great minds.. read more
Lol. This reminds me of someone who borrowed something from me. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol yep, this can strike memories :)
My folks always told me that "if you lend anything to anyone just assume you are never getting it back."

I do things will all my heart so to me it makes no difference.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol, it's true...
Thank you jessica
I have lost most of the things I borrowed and the same is true vice-versa:)
An enjoyable piece, Mr writer!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much Naat! :)
I never got back my things...because it's me who borrowed from others and never gave them back...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol :P Same... thank you!
Reminds me of a marriage joke. i would have shared, but cannot remember it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol :D It's fine, thank you for reviewing!
...or Forever.
Heh...I often wonder why we have to leave 25 character reviews? What if I can say what I feel in 13?

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol :D
I wonder...
Thanks Anastasia!
And it's not just pencils either.......

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Yep, it can be pens or even erasers :D
Thank you for reviewing
Hahahah that's absolutely true! In my case, it used to be ball points in university lol I never got to use a pen throughout the end 😛 and that irritated me a lot when people just forgot returning my pens haha
So on point, Shaan. Loved this 😊👍

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Omg I know right :D Thank you so much Yumna!
Just wanted y'all to feel annoyed after reading .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Haha you little joker 😂
You're welcome, Shaan 😊😊
Haha, that would be nice...:)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

7 Months Ago

Lol yep Surya :D Thank you!

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