Favorite fruit... (Poem)

Wow!

My favorite fruit

A sweet, juicy sensation

Drum roll please... mangoes!

I can write a whole poem on mangoes... 

- Shaan

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Mango are good. I agree.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Mangoes are so delicious. Love the juicy sensation. This could even be an advertisement about mangoes lol. Cute poem.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much Capolavoro! :D

[matrixmark]

Thanks for sharing your passion for mangoes. It went down a treat:-)

Mark.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you and no problem Mike! :)

[matrixmark]

I saw that.

Ray.

[Mr.Writer]

No... no, no no.. Get out Ray! xD

[matrixmark]

Be good to Mark.

Ray.

[Mr.Writer]

Uh I-I will... ;)

[matrixmark]

I'll be watching.

Ray.

[Mr.Writer]

Well, I'll be watching you then... ;)
And you cannot torment me :P

[Great Aunt Astri]

I LOVE mangoes, and your poem is not bad either!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much

[Najam Us Saher]

Mangoes are my favourite too.... very nice poem.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol same :D Thank you Najam! :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome

[Jessica Lima]

They ARE pretty delicious. haha. Mangos should be an aphrodisiac. Soooo good. Well put!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you Jessica!

[Chase Dylan]

And now... My mouth waters after reading... Damn you, Mr. Writer... Damn you and your juicy lines... Sweetly penned...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol Silente! xD
No problem and thank you! :D
Damn you and your awesome reviews :P

[Chase Dylan]

You are most welcome, damn you and your making me hungry... Although I am a blueberry man...

[Mr.Writer]

Lol Silente xD
What can I say... mangoes can beat every fruit :P

[Mel Jayne]

Very meta. Nice incorporation of the colour through the text. If only the picture would remain unseen by the reader. it would have added suspense.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Mel!! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Mangoes are the most loved fruit..even i love..

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thats true, thank you :)

[Zephyr]

I enjoyed, Shaan....
Mangoes are a sensation esp in our place......

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Naat!

[Zephyr]

My pleasure........