Fate (Poem)

Fate (Poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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fate

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I imagine you and I;
Walking on the sea shore
Taking a selfie when sunset comes 
Holding hands when it gets dark
Eating spicy street food
Posting weird pics of each other

I imagine our problems;
Talking to our parents
Arguing with them to get married
Doing court marriage 
Getting thrown out of the house 
Our parents considering us dead 

I imagine our children;
Always jumping around the house
Throwing tantrums when they get upset
Meeting their friends grandparents
Asking for their grandparents
Getting thrown out of that house when asked





© 2017 Mr.Writer



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You wrote this work beautifully. I like the way you expressed the whole story from marriage to children and all. I enjoyed the work. Well done. 😊

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Raj! :)
Lol...getting thrown outta everywhere.
This is an enjoyable read. It really is. It makes me think about being young and reckless.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Anastasia! :D
Sad, very well-written poem about parental rejection affecting generations. "Our parents considering us dead" and children "asking for their grandparents" who are absent from their lives..Excellent work!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Nice Soliloquy. what I like best about them is you can express emotions and ideas in your own personality. Smooth talkers and hesitant thinkers could have the same idea but express it so differently that there are no similarities between the two. Some creative writing classes use this, it is a trick to learn how each student thinks, sneaky isn't it. Well done I like it Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Bear!!! :)
ouch...quite tragic i tell you...😂 but sweet too... i wish the parents would have accepted them but then , you wouldn't got a chance to write a poetry ...lol. jokes apart...sometimes it made me sad but then its very sweet... Vivid imagination...keep writing

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank yo
Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Heart!
Well.... what you wrote really happens.
You have conveyed it really well.
Keep it up!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Lol thank you Naat!
Neetha

1 Month Ago

My pleasure...
hahah...a pretty cute poem this is...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Wajiha! Really appreciated :)
Haha, a life, you shown it...it's veautiful..I liked it...:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Surya!
I like first paragraph and the scenario as well they way you created it..It's just awesome

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Thank you Farhan! :)
It's like you have created a scenario of life in few words. I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mr.Writer

1 Month Ago

Really appreciated Najam :)

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Added on May 17, 2017
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Mr.Writer
Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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