King or Queen (Poem)

Follow me and I'll take you places;

places you've never seen

Hold my hand tight and don't let go

Cause' if you let go, there'll be a great scene

You'll fall in a world with people you don't know

And this time you won't be king or queen

Your chapter should have ended ages ago

And trust me, you won't be clean

Reviews

[pia]

This is amazing
Well since its so open ended ill analyse it in a way that lets me relate to it. Holding on to people who are the most special to u and treat your a king or a queen
Ppl who let u stand out and let you be special
And when you let go of em
U fall back into a crowd that doesnt appreciate you the way they do
Great job i loved it

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Pia! :)

[Sam]

Wow! Really liked the way your words flowed, and the Idea. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem! I definitely enjoyed reading this!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Senya! :)

[Maria]

Nicely put. Love how it all just goes together and like a breeze, the words, fly by, full of much meaning.

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Maria! :)

[Kesha]

A great piece.. it sort of feels unfinished.. as though you could keep going with this one.. why wont they be clean? Where are they going? Lol idk... nicely written though!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Kesha! :)

[Mr.Writer]

Lol yeah, I kinda tried to make it that way lol

[Kesha]

Haha you're welcome :)

[Zephyr]

Its a short but meaningful work!'
We often ignore people who love us!
Great work, Shaan......:)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Naat! :)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

i really appreciate the pace you have written it with... tremendous piece of writing i must say... keep writing

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Abhishek! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy this poem.
"Your chapter should have ended ages ago
And trust me, you won't be clean"
I liked the above lines. Good to get some dirt on us in a grand adventure. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Raj Sahu]

“You'll fall in a world with people you don't know
And this time you won't be king or queen

Your chapter should have ended ages ago
And trust me, you won't be clean”

It is an excellent piece of work. I like the rhymes you used here. You had penned it very well. Keep writing. 😊

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much Raj!)

[Stacy Purvis]

Are you threatening me?
BAHAHAHAHA Just kidding.
I'm a germaphobe, so we gotta stay clean. 😉
Excellent read.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol I'm not xD
Thank you Anastasia!!

[Stacy Purvis]

😂😂😂 Silly...

[Jessica Lima]

Very Powerful!

I'm adding this one to my favorites because I just can't stop reading it!!! Being surrounded by people you don't know and meaning nothing to them can put a person in such uncomfortable situation.

Very refreshing to read!

[Mr.Writer]

Lol thank you so much Jessica! :))