You are the one... (poem)

You are the one...

When I look at you, I'm stunned;

by your beauty

your never-ending beauty

I'm blown away by your smart mind;

always having an answer

to all of my questions

I need to talk to you;

cause if I don't

if feels as if I haven't lived

Your smile gleaming at me

brightening my day;

it's effect, even better than the sun

The way you laugh;

so perfect and elegant

that it needs to be put on repeat

And as you touch me;

my body surrenders

needing more of you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and powerful words for love. I enjoyed the energy of the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Caroline]

Love this poem ...great work !

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Carloline :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ohho....shaan!!
poetry aur woh bhi romantic....(laughs)...
nicely written.

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, haha thank you Wajiha! :)

[Zephyr]

Its so beautiful Shaan:)
Lovely, sweet and so full of love.
Keep writing!!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

Very sweet poem. I like the feeling of love in it. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Capolavoro! :)

[Sofia]

Nicely written. A beautiful poem with simple and beautiful words :)

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sofia! :)

[Sofia]

Welcome :)

[Zoya]

Beautiful poem...something that has to be felt rather than just being read...well written!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you so much! :)

[Zoya]

No problem

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good and romantic one..wonderful ☺

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Farhan! :)

[Kesha]

A great and romantic piece! I liked the style of it!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Kesha! :)

[Kesha]

You're welcome

[Sam]

This was very well written, and elegant! I definitely enjoyed reading this!

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you Sam! :)