My scarred heart

My scarred heart

A Poem by Mr.Writer
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My scarred heart...

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I have pen and a paper
and a scarred heart

in that heart
there are still feelings

memories, that led to it's scarring
also to which I don't want to remember

and I'm trying to pour them out
onto this blank paper of mine

surprisingly 
nothing comes out

I try again and still
can't write a word

as I'm too scared
of people's reactions

and to what they'll say about the words
coming from my scarred heart

© 2017 Mr.Writer



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We often find ourselves in the situation you depicted above. Wanna say something, but can't bring out a word. And that hurts seriously. Hope your scarred heart heels fast:)

Posted 1 Week Ago


This is beautiful and emotional...raw, real. I love it! Keep sharing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

4 Months Ago

Thank you Anastasia! :)
I am so happy to read this work....cause couldn't be active these days and I really missed writers care.... So ... as the poem is concerned great title...ofcourse not rhyming but who cares . Poetry doesn't have to always rhyme....its really beautiful..its neither too short not too long...its perfect. Strong emotion and the best part....it is so relatable to everyone...as all are writers here... Keep it up Shaan. Great work


Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Heart!! :)
It's rlly appreciated!
O wow! I really liked your poem. It conveyed a lot of emotion, and meaning. The rhythm, and flow was also really good. I definitely enjoyed reading this!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Sam! :)
Yes! How true this is. How writing can spill out this side of you that is so tender, so vulnerable you want to hide it! But this is the most beautiful part about it. Thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much! :)
I completely understand where you are coming from, I too use to be afraid of what other's might say about my writing, but we can's let others hold us back. We can and must write!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Yes, we can't let others hold us back!
Thank you Amber :)
you should not bother about others...just write what comes to you ... and let the words flow :)
the reason we write is not because we feel we are very well versed with poetry..its because we feel
we cant take it any more and we want it to express it some how ... so writing helps... then why think so much...



Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

I agree with you so much!
It's better to pour out our hearts instead of thinking about other.. read more
Don't be scared about those words...
a beautiful poem you wrote.
Keep on writing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you Priyanshi! :))
Anyone who joins Silente and his little SJW bully clan will get the same treatment. You will get the same treatment.

Posted 6 Months Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I really hate this feeling.. I'm sure we all know it too well, a relatable piece, wonderfully constructed

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

6 Months Ago

Yes we do, Shaan just block this guy, he is insane
Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Yeah, I blocked him lol he's rlly weird and annoying
Kesha

6 Months Ago

Lol yeah he is

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Mr.Writer

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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