The house where I never feel at home in (poem)

The house where I never feel at home in (poem)

A Poem by Mr.Writer
"

This is dark and deep...

"
I'm scared
I'm helpless
I need someone by my side,
so they can listen to me

and hear all about the fights and taunts
I witness almost everyday in my house;
the house where I never feel at home in

How my parents voices raise;
raise higher than the waves of
the ocean

and I want it to stop
so we all can live 
peacefully 

But, it never does
no matter how far I run away
the voices always reach to me
and drag me down with them

I still try and try to be happy
but deep down inside, I'm shattered, 
lost and afraid

© 2017 Mr.Writer



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You so easily pour out the emotions through your poems...
You will be okay and you will find the peace you are looking for...
Thank you for sharing this:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

4 Months Ago

Thank you Neetha! :)
Mr Writer, this is a very honest and brave write.
There is nothing wrong with shattered such people do extraordinary things broken and still breathing everyday. Your desire to want something bigger from life shines threw in this courageous write.

Sheer Terror

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Sheer!! :)
I agree with you, there is nothing wrong with them, they just ne.. read more
There's a home out there for everyone I like to think.. I'm still searching :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

I agree :)
Thank you Golden! :)
I think we all hv a place we do not fit in. Very relatable!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Yeah, I agree!
Thank you Jessica! :))
As difficult as it may seem you will make it out. Keep using writing as an outlet you are great at it

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you Jade!! :)
Really a deep write..but one day, everything will be fine...peace will be discovered..overall a great poem and heart touching too.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

I really hope so!
Thank you Priyanshi! :))
Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

My pleasure, friend.
One day everything will make sense..there are many who are shattered inside..but we need to remember that we are important..
We are getting stronger with each scar..
U have to be trained to be on the top of the world..and training gives pain..

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Yeah, we get stronger and stronger with each sorrow
Thank you Farhan :)
Very heart touching for me. Good job.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you Melody! :)
Yes, sadly, it is true for some of us. The very house that we live upon may be the place we want to escape the most, and no matter where and how we fast we run away, the pain always haunts us.

Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Yeah, it'll always hurt us...
Thank you Gwenn!! :)
The days of youth. Locked doors needed to be opened. The thoughts hard and direct. Powerful description left a lot for the reader to grasp. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.

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Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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