Prey

Prey

A Story by Mr.Writer
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It isn't a story, nor a poem, it's just something random I came up with lol

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I can hear the birds chirping 
         I can see them flying 
           with their delicate wings
             looking fiercely
           ready to hunt down 
                                     their prey
                                               but fail to do so
                                                  as they run away
                                            go out of reach
                                             and those birds
                                                  lash out
                                           their mouths watering
                                          in hunger 
                                          and in pain
                           as they end up 
                       falling down
                       in a pit
                        filled with
                       what they needed the most
                         worms
                         their prey
                


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It is always exciting to see a writer experimenting with different forms and styles to present their thoughts and feelings.This is a good writing exercise and shows the passion and strength of your desire to keep improving your craft. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Nature is honest. Birds must eat and worms become food. Nice use of words and thoughts my friend. Thank you for sharing the amzing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


This is a Poem... But i do admire the enthusiasm. It shows something coming. I can sense it. I know that if you were to dig deeper... You'd find something more deeper. I just know it.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interising form almost feel like worm. Ha just try to be funny. Your words very well describe why some victims cannot be avoid if life have to be on life. Thank you so much

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How befitting and so like nature in it's ironic cruelty at times for the predator to fall into a place to be devoured by it's former prey.
Nice thought and well executed experimental piece Mr W.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written Mr. Writer. Such a vivid words you have used in here.

Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Zoe
Oh yeah, nicely structured this one. Good job. Keep the ideas coming...and keep experimenting!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good story telling in this, really deep and makes me think.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well penned.. amazing poem kept me interested

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well done...keep it up

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very descriptive. You have created a nice imagery and I loved the way this poem was presented.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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First of all... I love to write! It has always been my passion to write since... last year! :D I can easily pour my emotions in writing without telling them to anyone. I love to review people's work.. more..

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