''Now''

''Now'' is,

your kiss

caressing mine...

The wind

outside...

The heat,

within...

 

The death

of sin,

with each breath

on your skin...

''Now'' is us

and we are now.

 

I know

you do not

realise,

like me,

how much,

i hold you

dear.

 

It feels

strangely

new,

this ancient

feeling...

 

''Now'' can only be

while i ''am'' with you...

 

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully done.

[Revery]

The reality of love transcends time and focus. It becomes central to are being eclipsing all other reality.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

the way you potray your love is so potent...even here, the feelings are so lovely they overwhelm the reader!
just amazing!

[Eagle Cruagh]

The Dream state in which everything
is larger than life, where desire rules
and seduction is only that part of the
dream which is absolutely NOW .
This is cleverly constructed and done
with tongue--- partly in cheek.
Extremely well done and
I LOVE IT.
---John

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the concise quality is well presented here to show how brevity in lines create the whole with emotional impact~ very well composed~