Muse For Rent

Muse For Rent

A Poem by shallimarRose
"

play it again Sam..

"

Yesterday  Sam posted a poem called Where Did My Muse Go? in which he was putting lost and found flyers out.  I was inspired to write this poem placing my own flyer and add..... 





Memories keep me awake

   Uncontrolled voices silently loud

      Sounding in the night , words

         Exiled more than once

            Forbidden secrets

               Obstinate thoughts

                  Resounding measures of time not left

                     Resting in the frontal cortex

                        Estranged from reality

                          Nocturnal nightingales

                              Testing my sanity nightly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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bj smith

aka shallimarRose


© 2013 shallimarRose


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Hi Rose. A good write about the fickle muse. A skillfully crafted Acrostic. Good presentation. Good imagery, flow and tone. Good depth of feeling. I like the power of the piece. I like this line:
"uncontrolled voices silently loud" - vivid. Good word choice. Well penned and a good read. Write on!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shelly glad you enjoyed.. I was not sure if I could make it work at first.. xo



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Awesome Acrostic! I think in line 4 that you meant than instead of then? Tell me, dear poet, do you ever sleep?! Your works are very much enjoyed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Yes Than would be correct thank you.. The darn auto spell check messes me up every time lol.
Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Oh, no...sorry to hear that. I know how hard that is. Hugs.
Sharon L.H. Kelly

10 Years Ago

Auto correct can be pesky, for sure!
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ron
Nicely done. I will have to try my hand at something like this.

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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ron..
Love this, the formatting is so very cool. A nice acrostic piece about that, at times, elusive inspiration.

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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jack.. It's my first in this style I think.. xo
Hi Rose. A good write about the fickle muse. A skillfully crafted Acrostic. Good presentation. Good imagery, flow and tone. Good depth of feeling. I like the power of the piece. I like this line:
"uncontrolled voices silently loud" - vivid. Good word choice. Well penned and a good read. Write on!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Shelly glad you enjoyed.. I was not sure if I could make it work at first.. xo
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Sam
LOL. I knew you would. Very nice though. Very nice. Made me smile.

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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Well I told you I would so its not like you're physic lol.. xo shallimar
Sam

10 Years Ago

LOL I know. I just wasn't expecting it over night :P

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shallimarRose
shallimarRose

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I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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