A Dance Apart

A Dance Apart

A Poem by shallimarRose
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This was written for someone that was once very special in my life.

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A Dance Apart

 

We never got to dance did we,

yet somehow remembering

dancing in the moonlight

……..with you

feelings deep within

my heart playing a love song

 admitting my feelings

 ……..might have

finally released my soul

if only you'd spoken

in quiet whispers

the glow of your heart

might have unlocked mine

far beyond this body of flesh

deep within the soul

sensations might have

mingled in the wind

and we could become one

but for now we remain

just a dance apart

 

©  bj smith

aka shallimarRose

 

 

 

 

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© 2013 shallimarRose


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This is so sad sweet Rose and I know, because I know this feeling well. Wanting to say something, express feelings but holding back for reasons unknown...longing for that dance and hoping it is not the last. Your poem has taken me to a grassy spot along side of a still lake at night with a three quarter moon glistneing on the water. I can hear the music, I want to dance, but don't. Very sad indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This was really sad *tear* and really well-written! missed opportunities are the worst, and far more tragic than opportunities that were never there!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cher for stopping to read.. shallimarRose
Breathtaking, simply a beautiful read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you again Rosa.. xo
There have been many times when I have missed an opportunity, and I often wonder, what if? Would my life be any different if I hadn't taken that step, or if I had. We may never know, eh?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Maybe not Richie.. You just have to be willing to open doors I guess but we leave them closed out of.. read more
Richie

10 Years Ago

Yes, perhaps. Or, maybe we fear what others may think?
This made me cry,life's longings ,raw and full of emotion.thanks

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Awww, don't cry Amanda.. Stepping stones to where we wind up perhaps. I would not change a thing. s.. read more
I enjoyed this very much...what could have been...very wistful.....kindles memmories in me long forgotten...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Carol. Yes if it touches you in a way to recall I am pleased.. Rose
This was so sweet and romantic yet its bitter sweet. brought a tear to my eye. very lovely rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you WRose for reading. I love when something I write touches someone.. xo
To look back and wish we had...all the what if's..it is just so sad..

Dance Rose! Dance!

Hugs, Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Yes but then you have to stop and think If you had taken that dance all the wonderful other things y.. read more
What a gorgeous piece poetry describing a long lost love that never never managed to bloom. Do you know whether they know they feel the same? Did you you ever get a sign, was it too late? ....is there still a chance?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

I still talk to him every now and again. Yes he feels that way. I guess there is always that openin.. read more
Keith

10 Years Ago

Ah yes, another beautiful story from the divine Miss ShallimarRose!
The poem is good. Words well arranged. I appreciated the last three line - Its really unfortunate.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read Kingsley. shallimarRose
Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
So true. Sometimes it can be just the tiniest thing holding us back or keeping us from being too risky.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.. Rose

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shallimarRose

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