Anger

The body outwardly seen as ice-clad mountain,
Deep within residing the lava anger,
Broken words forms fissure in thoughts,
The fissure deepens and grows stronger!

A conduit from mind to tongue is formed,
The tongue gives vent to words,
Thinking of nothing else,
The words are thrown like swords.

When anger reaches summit,
People do not think of what to do or speak,
Wildly ending up in actions
And words that are mostly reek!

The anger in human volcano,
Turns from streaks to bands,
In wild hatred or physical pain,
Is where it usually lands!

To realize it “No gain but just pure pain”
Which men usually miss out-
Rather just adds a big "D" in front of
Every little anger, that burns out.




** a few of the readers might end up in a doubt what actually that "D" means, its nothing but, anger leads to "D"anger  , now you can read it together "Danger", so every time you get annoyed just think of  "D".

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Amazing poem

[Avocations of Amber]

What a very proverbial poem you've written here. Yes, better is the wise man who knows when to be quiet :) I like how you've given us this image of a volcano to symbolize this mounting anger and I love the word play at the end for anger and "danger". Very clever of u........

[Wicahpi]

I had that figured out straight away....ummm...from experience of life.
A great message; well written and thought out.

[An owl on the moon]

Powerfully spoken, giving us glimpse after glimpse of the dangers of anger (and a bit of a word play too)! Anger, revenge and such deeply cut into the well-being of us all, blinding us to love, life, and joy... Thank you for the profound poetic warning!

[Bette]

i agree that D anger is very clever. i like the flow and wording. well done.

[Therene]

Clever on danger and anger. :D

Yes, I like the sensory image on this one. I only wonder though if that volcano could ever become dormant. :)) Just a thought. For technicals, I like your rhyming scheme. Flow is brought out really well.

Job well done!

[Dev]

I actually relate to this.. I am a person who has this dormant anger.. If its orovoked its hell !! haha.. nice write.. but I agree with MagiCrystal.. I hv trouble with the D too.. its abrupt

[Simple_mee]

So True and an awesome piece !!
Nice way of putting it, Will certainl try to think of that "D" the next time I get angry at someone...

[MagiCrystal]

I have troubled with the letter " D " over all... I like it
It leads to Hell... for sure.. we go in a Comatose.. when anger comes
Mind shuts.. and damn.... off we go.. lol

[vyshu]

ya its true i liked it