I read poetry when I feel drawn to a soul ...I already said that I like your style many times before,( but this poem my sweets !!! )
Has got me so embedded word by word. The way you laid these verses.
I think I will read it again and again..you really want to know if I like it? Poet, I wonder why ,if you are right and there's a twin soul that belong to us or the opposite, do we belong in someone's else's life? It scares me when I read the last verse, even in the mind Ha!
Please promise that no matter what , you'll never let go.. ok?
That's how much I like this poem..xx00
I am disappointed, I thought this would be entirely about me and how wonderful and inspiring person I am. But NO. You had to go an write a well written, freely moving, and outstanding poem not about Me.
This is so beautifully expressed, taking us across the diversity of poetic expression and letting each reflect a side of the one you love. The last lines reflect the depth of this enchantment!
So romantic, and absolutely wonderful. The analogies you made between your lover and those poems and sonnets, etc. were simply very creative. Great Job.
The poem is more then amazing. Each set of lines making the poem stronger and more complete. I like the statement with the words of poetry coming forward and create a outstanding poem. You create a powerful poem of love and kindness.
Coyote
I read poetry when I feel drawn to a soul ...I already said that I like your style many times before,( but this poem my sweets !!! )
Has got me so embedded word by word. The way you laid these verses.
I think I will read it again and again..you really want to know if I like it? Poet, I wonder why ,if you are right and there's a twin soul that belong to us or the opposite, do we belong in someone's else's life? It scares me when I read the last verse, even in the mind Ha!
Please promise that no matter what , you'll never let go.. ok?
That's how much I like this poem..xx00
To walk along the shore, leaving behind the footprints for the sea waves to tickle, the cool water washing your legs as you walk by, gentle breeze whiffing your cheek and mildly wavering .. more..