I'm Longing ......

When I wake up in the morning,
With fresh energy and mind,
I’m longing to see your photo,
For the first thing I see should be you.

When I feel the rays of the golden sun,
Spreading warmth all around,
I’m longing to feel the warmth of you,
Sending warmth down my spine and skin.

When I taste the sweetest berries,
Seeping the sweetness through the tongue,
I’m longing to taste the flavor of your lips,
Entangling me in the passion of your kiss.

When I hear the doorbell,
Waking my senses with its volume,
I’m longing it should be you,
Whose lovely face I could see.

When I look up at the stars,
Shinning down on earth,
I’m longing to see your eyes,
Ever shining and looking into mine!

When I fall deep asleep,
Resting my mind and soul,
I’m longing that you should be my dream,
For I don’t want to miss you even while sleep.


Longing For Love ~ Gold Star

Jul 24, 2010

• Longing For Love
• I'm Longing ......

Runner-Up

Aug 5, 2010

• Whose heart?
• I'm Longing ......

Reviews

[qaralynn]

great poem..love it!

[JENY]

Wow…
A perfect expression of longing…
Very dedicated love….
Your sweetheart is lucky to have you…

[Simple_mee]

A very very b'ful write! The feelings of love & longing were very perfectly portrayed! :)

[HorrorMaster]

A beautiful poem. Glad you won for this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and desire. I like the feel and hope in your words. You described a good feeling and made this poem a very good read. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[A.Lee]

Very sweet. You conveyed the feeling very well in this piece. Great job.

[Tina Kline]

This is such a beautiful love poem of deep longing. It's almost painful in its intensity, at least I thought so. But beautiful, so very beautiful too.

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what a beautiful expression of loving someone and wanting them to encompass your life..wonderful

[Poetic Beauty]

this is how it should be when you really love some one whole heartedly. This is a great expression of that kind of deep love and sentiment. the flow of the poem is done really good.

[Manda]

Awww i absolutely adored this piece! it was so meaningful. full of love and passion. the longing for your admire! beautifully written!