Yes, 'she is nature's midnight delight!' indeed! The moon is one of the things I love the most about the night and it has always been an inspiration for me.
I love how in the second stanza you made everything come into life .. the stars, the clouds, and the moon as they communicate with each other in silence.
You painted a beautiful picture in the sky, and I love this poem.
Well done.
The ending could not be more perfect, reading this I noticed how much I really loved the flow of it, the way the whole thing moves in the readers mind is an experience. The vision painted in the readers mind by your words is vivid and unique, its beautiful in a wonderous way. I really love this piece. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine
What a beautiful piece, bringing alive the moon as the wondrous character of night... There is a peaceful playfulness here that makes your words a delight to read!
To walk along the shore, leaving behind the footprints for the sea waves to tickle, the cool water washing your legs as you walk by, gentle breeze whiffing your cheek and mildly wavering .. more..