Mickey's Gift

Mickey's Gift

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

























Mickey wanted to gift minnie,

Thought of a cute little thing
But alas, he had no penny,
He sat there sad and weeping.

Mr. Donald gave his helping hand,
He sat there thinking hard,
But all his ideas were so bland,
Finally he took out a card.

They went to Pluto, the wise pup,
For he would give some hint,
Pluto winked and gave a cup,
Which had some cash and mint.

Mickey yelled and jumped in joy,
As the three went to shop,
There he found a cute toy,
which would jump and hop.

Chewing the mint in joy and gay,
They walked to Mickey’s house,
Daisy came across their way,
Who was Donald’s spouse!

Daisy joined her hubby’s team,
To help them wrap the toy,
then she adorned it with a lacy seam,
seeing this, minnie will really enjoy


Minnie entered her tidy room,
She was filled with awe,
She heard a voice say “boom”,
And laughed at what she saw.


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Awards / Badges won:

2nd runner up

Aug 29, 2010



Winner

Sep 3, 2010




© 2011 Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)


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I found this poem very cute and funny at the same time and for a while I was back to my childhood.
I have not been watching Disney movies in a while and you made me live it all again, and the same happiness sprung on me, so I thank you for that.
Congratulations on your badges, it was totally worth it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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lovely childrens poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


What did she saw…??
Why did you left it incomplete…..
I feel so sad….
It was a cute story….


Posted 13 Years Ago


Rhythm and rhyme are very well done, and the content is truly lovely. Every kiddy will like this a lot. Thumb up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


So cute! I loved it. I'm a huge Disney fan. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very cute well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can imagine this in real time animation. :))

You are certainly a very talented poet. Not only in content but also in technicals. I do not doubt the medal that shows at the end of the poem one bit. Though I really wanted to know what that gift that would jump and hop so I could buy one myself. XD

Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


To fun, so cute, loved it you clever thing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You have a great mind. To create a story using Mickey mouse and Disney. It was a very nice story. Made me smile this morning.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)
Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

Irving, TX



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