CRIMSON RIVER!

CRIMSON RIVER

The river flows swift and smooth,

As the satin waves unfolds it self!

Glimmering in dusk rays glides glassy

As the crystals of shining dust spreads,

How so lovely it looks at twilight!

As the flowers fall down its way,

On the rouged river, that flows soft,

Stripped bare conceding its charm,

Like rubies dusted over its top,

The crimson rays of the sunset falls,

On this glossy river that flows, crimson!

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful and vibrant poem. Your words have created this beautiful scene you witnessed so we all can enjoy it. Excellent writing. :)

[Tina Kline]

Your words paint a very beautiful place and moment in time. I would want to experience this over and over again! Nicely done!

[Berkeley Street Writer]

Very impressive, your words brought this splendid sight to life for me. It sounds enchanting!

[MOON]

Beautiful your words compliments the picture so well.

[Eric Cox]

Sweet imagery. Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and description. You took me to a good place with your words. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Shay]

i liked the imagery, i could picture myself there and it was fun to read

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the amazing imagery..beautiful.