So Close

So Close

A Story by ShaneBerry
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a short love story

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So Close

The boy, sat next to the girl, both with brown hair, and both with green eyes.  The dim glow of the moon was all that illuminated their faces, the streets below them were empty at this hour. The sky was clear the moon was full, and the stars were shining.

The balcony’s stone bench they sat on was cold, the cool chill made her scoot closer to him. They were friends from childhood, but they had never looked at each other the way they did now. Not a word was spoke, they just looked at each other, he wanted to move, and so did she, their lips grew closer, and closer. Soon their eyes began to close, and then. She looked up at the moon, and so did he.

The moment that could have defined the rest of their life together, was so close one moment, but in the next fraction of a second, it was farther away than ever. She blushed, He smiled. She stood, He sulked. She spoke of the cold night, and then left to her home.  And all he could say was…
“So close”…

© 2010 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
just something i cooked up lolz

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Well beautiful description of romance, but something changed everything...
:)
Nice one with elegant and a gentle purity in it..
Thanks for sharing!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Seize the day. Brilliant story. He missed his chance.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Though it was pretty short, I liked it. Keep on writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awwww man, this was so cute....
simple and yet very cute...If this was randomly wrote by you then I must say that you're very talented...nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww...cool :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pretty sweet work here, touching stuff. sure hope to see more stories like this one!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 24, 2010
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Tags: love, romance, heartbreak, drama, forgotten, past, present, future, last chance, girl.

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ShaneBerry
ShaneBerry

denton, TX



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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