Falling

Falling

A Poem by ShaneBerry

I do not know,

What words I can say

To describe why

I feel this way.

A bite on the finger,

A kiss on your cheek,

Your skin turns from soft white,

To red as a beet.

Resting my head on your soft, fair hair,

And thinking of things,

I became completely aware.

That I am falling my dear.

And I say to myself,

I will always want to be right here.

Falling without fear.

My arms wrapped around your waist.

The feel of the air, the scents and the tastes.

Are forever imbedded into my memory,

I hope this is not fake,

I want this to be real, a dream won’t do.

If it is a dream, I wish to never awake.

And if I am to awake, I hope it is beside, you.

© 2013 ShaneBerry


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I'm not sure about the red as a beet, (I assume you mean beetroot which as far as my eyes can see is purple), however other than that it's written well has a good flow.



Posted 12 Years Ago


How nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is beautifully written, your emotions are out in the open for all to see.

Posted 12 Years Ago


HaHo,
The love of your life. Keep that feeling forever and where could you go wrong? I know that feeling! Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You don't sound like you're over thinking this but you do sound like you know what you're doing. This is neat stuff! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


the true feelings make the writing more honest and deep and that's what makes it beautiful :) nice piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


Incredible I am so glad that you are happy like this. God bless Kayla! Incredible writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is SO sweet. Very sincere and full of love. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


a sweet loving poem, I know exactly how you feel :)
this was a strong expression of your feelings, and it being personal, just makes it even more stronger and believable. Thank you for sharing this :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a really sweet poem, it has a very nice flow to it, great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Tags: love, poem, Kayla, Shane, heart, romance, heart break, leaving, hope, strength, friendship, waiting, wishing, thinking, fun, blond, green, white, i fucking love this woman!!!!!

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ShaneBerry
ShaneBerry

denton, TX



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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