Life

recently there have been allot of changes in my life, most are very inconvenient and annoying, but going back through my old reviews and reading some of my old stuff has given greater perspective!

Life

How transient it is,

Like the edge of a knife,

Here then gone, 

Like the gentle Swan,

And dark, as satins’ spawn.

 

An epic tail,

Or a long unraveled trail.

No one the same,

And not one reclaimed.

When started 

It cannot be stopped.

When stopped,

It cannot be restarted.

 

All the hell and terrible strife,

Is a costly price,

The price, for life.

 

Author's Note

well? thoughts comments? anything :)

Reviews

I like this poem because it isn't sugar-coated and completely positive. This poem is very well written and true to all of us, because life can't always BE perfect. I love it! Nice job :)

[Katie]

A fairly simple poem, but it is right to the point, and well written.

[Ruth]

You sum it up well love! Powerfully profound :) xx

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

This write shows an honest partt of life...
Nice write!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the statements in this poem. Words are true. After birth can't stop the life from create fears and dreams. A excellent poem.
Coyote