I know

I know

A Poem by heith.ash

I know it's rude to stare,
And my mind tells me to look away,
But I just ignore,like I really don't care.

I know if I open my heart and tell you everything,
There are chances I may get betrayed,
But I am unable to control it since I feel something.

I know there are people better than me,
Pretty, smart and way out of my league,
But I wish I could be the only one you'd see.

I know I should walk away,
But it's quite difficult since
I have fallen hard for you,
And when I'm just about to turn my heart wins making me stay.

I know you'll never look at me the way I do,
But my heart wishes otherwise,
And sadly my heart already belongs to you.

But,wait a minute! We fall in love with the most unexpected person at the most expected time,
And I pray that maybe,
One day you'll notice and you'll be mine.

© 2019 heith.ash


Author's Note

heith.ash
Please ignore the gramatical mistakes that I might have made.

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Ya know Heith?
I think, when the heart makes its choice, there is little we can do but hope that whomever it's chosen, their heart will choose ours right back. But, that is the miracles of love and attraction that is often more rare and wonderful than we'd hoped for.
Still, we have little (if any) control over the heart's choices, and there may be many in our lives to live through, to learn, and give us so much we'd never have had in any other ways.
And, because of this learning and growing stronger (painful though it may be), as the wise and knowing Alfred Lord Tennyson put it, " 'Tis better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all."
We may hope and pray it all comes true, or we may fail many times before finding that perfect soulmate, our hearts will never let us rest until we do.
I never heard it said more powerfully and emotionally true than through the wonder of the magic in your lovely emotional words that reach right in and grip the heart's very pulse-beats … ummm, I love it!
What could be more honest and sincere feeling than:

"I know you'll never look at me the way I do,
But my heart wishes otherwise,
And sadly my heart already belongs to you."

Excellently rendered poetry, Heith, in an original format and spot-on rhyme scheme.
Much enjoyed, indeed, thank you sincerely! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Psst! (maybe, a couple of longer lines could be split for balance and ease of read, but, other than that, I think it's perfect) 😊

Posted 4 Years Ago


heith.ash

4 Years Ago

You are right Richard ,when the heart makes choice there's little that we can do ,but hope.
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Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

I'm proud to be one of your fans, Heith … it's an honor. 😊
awww, this is so sweet and wonderful. So nicely written

Posted 4 Years Ago


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