It'll be okay

It'll be okay

A Poem by heith.ash
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No matter what happens in our life in the end everything somehow turns to be okay

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You don't always have to feel down ,learn to smile
The pain will surely go away it's just for a while
Whenever you feel depressed just take a look at the moon
Your troubles are gonna end ,you'll be happy very soon
Sometimes just stop worrying and be free
Its not necessary that you have to listen and always agree
And I know it's hard to keep up when your feelings are at bay
But, trust me at the end everything will be okay.

© 2019 heith.ash


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heith.ash
Thanks for reading 😁

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Beautifully optimistic, Heith!
This is a very wise poem every doubter and worrier should read, understand, and embed into their minds, hearts, and souls, so they'll never again feel depressed or fret, just relax and let it flow, knowing all will work out in the end.
With a little hope and caring effort, it always does … in the ways it's supposed to, eh?
Helpful hints: Well-rendered, meaningful Rhyming Couplets are among my favorite forms, especially when they're poetically separated into two-line Couplets or four-line Quatrains … they just seem to speak with a more powerful voice than when jammed together; they seem to "breathe" and express better. A size larger font would make it possible for those with dimming headlights to read and enjoy with greater ease, too. As a poetry teacher, I always try to help a friend, when possible. : )

Your mind and heart work sooo wonderfully well together, and the deeply-touching essence of your poetry proves this is true.
Thank you ever-so gratefully for sharing You with Us, Heith! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 4 Years Ago


heith.ash

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Richard for such a beautiful review.
And yes I did write this poem so that.. read more
Richard🖌

4 Years Ago

Lovely comments, Heith!
Yes, make those needed edits, and this one will shine, dance, and sin.. read more
Everything works out in the end, This is wonderful

Posted 4 Years Ago


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jim
you are right: it all works out in the end

Posted 4 Years Ago


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M@
That's awesome. It seems so genuine. And for a as dark a topic as depression there is a lightness to this poem which I find uplifting. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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heith.ash
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