No matter what happens in our life in the end everything somehow turns to be okay
You don't always have to feel down ,learn to smile
The pain will surely go away it's just for a while
Whenever you feel depressed just take a look at the moon
Your troubles are gonna end ,you'll be happy very soon
Sometimes just stop worrying and be free
Its not necessary that you have to listen and always agree
And I know it's hard to keep up when your feelings are at bay
But, trust me at the end everything will be okay.
Beautifully optimistic, Heith!
This is a very wise poem every doubter and worrier should read, understand, and embed into their minds, hearts, and souls, so they'll never again feel depressed or fret, just relax and let it flow, knowing all will work out in the end.
With a little hope and caring effort, it always does … in the ways it's supposed to, eh?
Helpful hints: Well-rendered, meaningful Rhyming Couplets are among my favorite forms, especially when they're poetically separated into two-line Couplets or four-line Quatrains … they just seem to speak with a more powerful voice than when jammed together; they seem to "breathe" and express better. A size larger font would make it possible for those with dimming headlights to read and enjoy with greater ease, too. As a poetry teacher, I always try to help a friend, when possible. : )
Your mind and heart work sooo wonderfully well together, and the deeply-touching essence of your poetry proves this is true.
Thank you ever-so gratefully for sharing You with Us, Heith! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
Thank you so much Richard for such a beautiful review.
And yes I did write this poem so that.. read moreThank you so much Richard for such a beautiful review.
And yes I did write this poem so that people would stop doubting them. A thing that I often do.
We all feel insecure and depressed at a point in life ,but that's how it is .but we all can handle just by believing that it's going to be okay.
I also appreciate when people are honest in their opinions.and thank you so much for pointing out certain things so that I can improve . I needed a friend who could tell me where I was going wrong .I guess I gained one.:)
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4 Years Ago
Lovely comments, Heith!
Yes, make those needed edits, and this one will shine, dance, and sin.. read moreLovely comments, Heith!
Yes, make those needed edits, and this one will shine, dance, and sing, as it deserves to. : )
That's awesome. It seems so genuine. And for a as dark a topic as depression there is a lightness to this poem which I find uplifting. Thanks for sharing this.
I love to read and write,though i suck at the writing part but i still try. i love nature and adventures.Another thing i love the most is making friends.
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