Atoms Split and Explode

How I feel about my life

Atoms Split and Explode   6/29/07


I feel stretched, thin and see-through.
Fragile like paper, easy to 
cut, rip, bend and crumple.
I am torn in twos and threes.
Spread like butter on too much bread.

I am self-aware and overbearing.
Deeply pensive and understanding.
People need to stop clinging, groping, and clawing
at my sensitive, bruised and crawling skin.
My head is cleaved, much to my dismay.

Hold me in your warm soft arms.
I just want to embrace your everlasting bright.
The stars are shining just for you.

Make me whole, for I am in tiny scattered pieces.
Do you keep contact with a higher power than I?
Can two become one flesh? Can we entwine?

I hold no expectations, thus no disappointments.
A simple solution will present itself if we keep our eyes wide.

Take my hand dear one, and we shall face forever together.

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Wow, i feel you here. The depictions are packed with emotion. The title was a fitting way of explaining life and the way it makes you feel. Great job bro!

[Jamey]

Thanks man. I enjoyed writing this

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome.

[Shabeeh Haider]

We have been through this.
At times when nothing seems right and we feel worthless.
The message of hope at the end will help one pass through this phase....if the right person holds your hands

[Jamey]

I appreciate your comment...so true