Wonder

Silk hats and garlands,

silver cigarette holders and brocade pipes,

Lifeless swans that strangle the past away,

Albino deers and copper stags,

caught not in headlights but cross fire,

The dying of wonder.

Reviews

[Perdition]

Well…itchy well..Nothing like a good hate to stir the pages…NIce~
You just had to 1959 Kodak the freak out of it didn't you? Soooo need to be reading this in some velvet lounge where an ivory dancer is sitting in bones and you're scream out for everyone to SHUT THE $$%%% UP!!! Yep..hate you big time..BUT in all the right places.

[Sher A. Lynn]

You're such a flirt. Thanks. I think? :P

[sereenaoutloud]

wow, this is a great write. "Lifeless swans that strangle the past away" This line packs a powerful punch!

[Sher A. Lynn]

Thank you @sereenaoutloud. Looking forward to more constructive criticism xx