Grave Brothers

Two grey twins

Stand shin to chin

Their hearts bound by twig and grime

A nest for words a bowl cut fair

With mouths so pure and eyes of lead

As poppy flowers mark their skin

And all those forgotten

Were found in sin

Reviews

[Richard]

this was really cool :) very good work

[Sher A. Lynn]

Thank you Richard. Positive comments really help encourage me to write more. Have a good one!

[FREE_BIRD]

nice reading sense of horror....yhave to pass through it

[Sher A. Lynn]

Thank you @FREE_BIRD

[Perdition]

I'm still thinking on this one..It's got me a little scared I must admit..lol. Truth is the writing is just as perfect as the other. I mean you're just not going to squeeze a penny between the lines; they're perfect. But the feeling I am left with in this one is somewhere between. should this have a mature rating on it?.. or is this, plain out, the same sort of slow sipping bubble gum eerie pulp as the other? Either way I am a little nervous…but I can't fault the writing and if I had a quarter I would probably buy another turn. AND..just cause I am smart does not mean I am a flirt…now we going for that ice cream or not? Hell of a writer lady. NIce having you back..I hated being one of the few originals left~

[Sher A. Lynn]

I feel like I could have done more with this. But sometimes, less is more. I can't seem to write like I used to. Think it has to do with the fact that I have more to say but prefer it to be muted in a way. Well, your words will definitely help see it through. Here's to the originals x

[Perdition]

Well when you do come to figure it out…keep it to yourself, I'd hate to be friends with my own demons..lol. Cheers ~

[Sher A. Lynn]

Duly noted.