Two-Faced Lovers

Time dosen't heal anything! You Do!

YOU! I can’t believe YOU!

Oh it puts me in such a RAGE to see you happy with SOMEONE ELSE!

You kissed me goodbye JUST THIS MORNING!

You said YOU LOVED ME!

If you didn’t love me you should have had the respect to tell me so!

WELL, you know WHAT?

That cute guy Gilberto, he's in my next class!!


YOU ARE A TWO- FACED LOVER!!

So I will be a vengeful lover!

OH the HATRED it brings me to see you happy with SOMEONE ELSE!

You think your sly, don’t you!?
You think your smart, don’t you?!

You should be thankful I'm not my Best Friend!

Had I SEEN YOU WITH HER!

My fists BURN thinking about it!


You are a Two-Faced Lover!!
So I will be a Two-Faced Lover!!!

THIS WAR BEGINS NOW!!!!!

"Hey Gilberto" I shout stopping him in the hall.

"HI!, how are you?" he says happy to see me.

"You want to get lunch later?" I ask him.

"Yeah, I know the most awesome Japanese place!" he replies.


You were a Two-Faced Lover!
Now I'm a Happy Lover!

Gilberto has PROPOSED!

I heard it didn’t work out with HER?

Well, you won’t come crying to me, Two-Faced Lover, you had your chance!

Reviews

[Elaina D.]

I'm so glad you haven't had your heart broke yet,because if you can write about things like this and never have gone through it I'd hate to see what you would be like to a real "Two-Faced Lover" ....mom

[Impulse]

This is an unfortunate situation that people often experience when dealing with lovers. I always say that if the person you're with is willing to cheat, they don't deserve you in the first place. That doesn't help the pain though. Only time will.

I could definitely feel the anger throughout your piece. The flow was a little choppy, but no worries. Overall, excellent job. Keep up the good work.