Love Is Chaos

Love is chaos, love is kind.

Love is painful, love is blind.

It knows not yours or mine,

Hand in hand intertwined.

This love was cautious as we started out

"You I cannot live without"

You swore to me one fateful night,

Long before I knew they all were right.

They said you were a dangerous one,

I heeded not, I did not run.

Congratulations,  you've won your game,

I played your pawn but I'm not the same.

You beat me down you hold the ace,

Your goodbye words a slap to my face.

Love is chaos, never kind.

Only painful, turns you blind.

Reviews

[Viet Pham]

Love truly is chaotic. So I won't say I love this poem that would not be "kind" of me. But I really enjoyed reading this, and I really like how you ended your poem by going full circle.

[Little Birdie]

Love truly is chaos, I love the dynamic rhythm in this poem.

[Key The bard]

though some places it dosent scan (but that might just be the way i read it.....) teh tipe face was very well thought out, and the message clear, i liked it overall thank you for writing it :)

[deeps]

Powerful write so full of emotions.
I enjoyed this write.