The Rain

The Rain

A Poem by shinybluestars03

As I sit here watching the rain
fall from my window
I find myself remembering about our past.
I start to remember about all the times
I cried for you,
and how my dreams of you and me
did not last.
The rain was just like my tears,
tears that you never swept away.
I was scared of you leaving me alone some day,
A fear I no longer have today.
I now know that after the rain
there is always a rainbow,
with that rainbow comes a clear blue sky.


The rain has stopped
the wounds have healed,
pain is no longer what I feel.
I will no longer be blinded by your lies,
I now have someone who will stand by my side.
Someone who has no feelings to hide,
feelings you never cared to show,
and that is why I had to let you go.



Copyright © bluestars .... [ 2006-06-30 01:58:09 ]
 

© 2008 shinybluestars03


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

nice simile.....

"i now know that after the rain
there is always a rainbow."

great line.

Posted 15 Years Ago


thats lovely. 'tears that you never swept away' thats a poweful line.
keep up your work. :D
-Kelly

Posted 15 Years Ago


It takes a strong person to hold onto a bad relationship
But an even stronger person to let go.
This is an execelent piece of writing.
Keep it up.

-Riley

Posted 15 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
V
As I was reaading this I was with you looking out the window feeling the rain, remembering. Definately thought provoking.

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

321 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 21, 2008
Last Updated on June 24, 2008