Empty Within

A poem dedicated to all my friends

I walk in the sun
I walk in the moonlight
Looking at my shadow
Because that the only one beside

But when the clouds come by
They take it away
Making me weak at heart
My spirit's blown away

Hoping the sun would come, and give me back ...
Everything I lost, and never had
I just want to say this once and for all ...

I don't wanna give up, I don't wanna give in
Because I know that someone is waiting
You are the sun of my life, where should I begin
Without a friend I'd be so ... empty within

Reviews

[Craba]

i like this write, it's profound and deep

[Treo LeGigeo]

Friendship usually gets rather overshadowed by love poetry, and this was an excellent tribute.

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks a lot !!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the description and the hope in the poem.
"I don't wanna give up, I don't wanna give in
Because I know that someone is waiting"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thank you !!!