A Drop Of Life

A bottle of crystal clear water

A bottle for which she'd run

On a sweaty summer afternoon

Under the blazing hot sun

The clear stream of pure life

Left the bottle, kissed her lip

Ran down her thirsty throat

Like a river with every sip

A few drops managed to escape

And raced down her chin,

Disappeard, while cooling off

Her glowing white skin

Slowly her breath calmed down

Her throbbing heart slowed

The raised hair slept again

To her life saver she bowed

Reviews

[Felecia]

Oooo so aweseom! I love the way you made the letters blue. amazing write!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks a lot !

[Sid]

Very well written and pleasingly descriptive...great write!!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks !!!

[Abdur Raqeeb]

A thought - provoking poem. You certainly have a great talent. Keep Going!!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thank you !

[Kelsey]

This is beautifully written. You did a wonderful job of painting a picture of what's happening. I really enjoyed this, very nice. x

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thank you Kelsey!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great description in the poem. I had to read a few times. I enjoy poetry that test the mind and thoughts. This poem did. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks a lot !

[Aehr]

i love the colored font, which gives a really good effect to the poem. I love the description. I think it's actually pretty good. The picture you've used as the icon for this piece (or whatever else it's called) is really super, and makes me thirsty for water everytime I glance at it! :)
Good work.

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thank u so much for the review Rhea! I'll make sure that I return the favor soon !

[Shubham's View]

Beautifully written! Really nice! ?:^}

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks buddy !

[B30]

Nicely done. That's pretty much all I can say, you summed it up very well. Some people might think that there is a twist but there is nothing really going on elsewhere. Nice!

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Thanks !!!