the 85th Percent.

don't review this on the lack of meaning if you can't find any. the point is to find your own meaning, i my self am not even sure of the intent of this poem or what was going through my mind at the time these words were typed into the draft box of my text

Water sleek like bullets pumping in my veins

A sudden realization bursting into full swing and game

Jazz master conducts the orchestral mechanism of the human mind

He teaches the pentatonic moksha that the soul swims through

operation system begins chlorophyll operations

The insanity and decadence of mental mechanical capabilities

Deteriorates next to me as the vibrating molecules which

are everything and anything realize they are in control.

The subatomic revolution is upon us my friends.

Eight Track darwinism gives way to iTechnology dependence.

A tragic heroin of gears, pistons, wires and motherboards.

Rest the remains and cremate the genocidal tendencies

burned within the cerebral workings of the homosapien mind;

focused on high retail cologne, politicians and pornoraphy.

 

Reviews

[Miles Evens]

this is really well written my favorite line is
"The insanity and decadence of mental mechanical capabilities"
your a really good poet and your vocab is really good
keep it up man