Death Trap

Death Trap

A Poem by iamshadowine

Thinking in the darkness is a death trap,
and I'm it's favourite prey.

© 2016 iamshadowine


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Yes, I know this phenomenon all too well

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
I agree. I love the night also. Very nice use of words my friend.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Maybe the darkness is a friend, not a foe. It is oblivious to us, not trying to prey. Sometimes is the only place some of us find comfort. Anyway, the darkness in our own heads is, indeed, a deathtrap.

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I like this. The darkness may be an familiar state, but we can never really trust it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

Thank you😊
nice thought and good poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you! :D
Arooj Purra

7 Years Ago

your welcome.
Great concise way to capture mind-traps that lead to death. I like it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you!! :D
Second favourite prey right here! Really enjoyed this. Thank you

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you!! :D
Whoah, nice job! You convey a really good message in a short and tidy poem. Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you! :D
Short and moving, pretty much summarizing a lot of writers, I think (I know I can relate to this, can't speak for others).

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you :)))
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two line with one comma hit the thought perfectly.
like this style..really death trap!!!!!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


iamshadowine

7 Years Ago

thank you! :)

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Added on June 29, 2016
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