Losing Myself

I’m not sure of the words present in me,

I don’t know the right deeds.

Why am I so quiet today?

What could be the reason?

The real me is lost.

The old me, blabbered all the time.

But now there’s no word on my lip.

What have I become?

The person I really hated?

I want to talk again,

I want to get back to life.

My soul exists, but without a heart,

My silence won’t drive me so far.

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When we are heartbroken. Silence is needed. I liked the honest thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you Shuchita for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sandipta$]

How sad... Emotionally attached

[iamshadowine]

thank you!

[C_theSurrealist]

I appreciate this poem so much because it hits me. Keep writing!! :D

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Jon Roggie]

Yet, silence can be a time of healing. A chance to contemplate yourself.

[Jackie]

A beautiful read and write! Thanks for sharing

[Emily]

Reminds me of depression some....great writing, keep it up!

[andrew mitchell]

A most readable topic well written and I hope to see you soon.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

you nailed it! it's relatable and intense.
"My silence won’t drive me so far."

[iamshadowine]

thanks ^_^

[Giulia King]

"My soul exists, but without a heart,
My silence won’t drive me so far." I feel like I an really relate to those two lines.

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Joshua Haines]

Great words. A vary nice read

[iamshadowine]

thank you :)