A slice of Him!

A slice of Him!

A Poem by Shweta Shah
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Not a big fan of this one...! But just Thought of it and decided to pen it down.

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A slice of Him!

Nobody cared for her,

No one even wanted her.

She was smart, loving and everything

And yet for society… nothing!

Worse when the time could be

Then arrived he.

 

She an introvert,

He an extrovert

She was the reason for his existence

But People? They were unaware of her existence.

She loved him with all her heart,

He returned the favor with his body in the start.

He paved the way for her dreams,

Opened her eyes to gaze on the surreal horizon and with the transparent beams.

With him she reached beyond the zenith, the sky became limitless…

He was all she could ever wish for…Oh my! He was flawless.

In fact every girl could wish for…

The guy…

Careless yet caring…Why?

Had all the time for them, on his pace

 Still respected when they wanted their space…

Understood their very demands and feelings…

And knew when to leave alone, Huh! Those hideous beings

Soon there was a reason for her to be

And that was he…

 

He was a magnetic personality,

 She the repelling end.

Both were an integral part of each others’ lives

 And their love couldn’t be bend.

His every achievement, every soul fallen for him…

Made her proud to have such an asset as him

Society finally accepted her with that esteem,

All thanks to him.

She explored the intimacy she felt,

Wearing his clothes and his much used belt

Peeking a glance at his reflection in the mirror

The very thought of separation made her quiver.

Though both never had been together

Like the parallel lines along the road, with each other, but apart forever…

But the time casts its spell…

The soiled pads made her life hell

Puberty took its toll

Her alter ego Left her all alone

Now she can never be

Her favorite he!

And for the rest of her life
all she could do was savor that slice.
Although they were one to be,
But she craved for he...

© 2015 Shweta Shah


Author's Note

Shweta Shah
I dont know how you guys perceived it...But here is my idea!
Spoiler Alert!
The girl totally neglected by the society for her ways...Felt all alone...Got an idea...Turned into a guy...Dressed like one...People loved the guy...The girls and society who neglected the girl were fond of the guy...but she turned into a teen...couldnt look and dress like the guy...now relishes herself from that nostalgia!

Feel free to share yours.

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I thought it was about a lover, changing the girl's life around, accepting her as no one else would, to be honest you note caught me by surprise !
I really would like to know why the font is huge...
I like it better knowing it's about different persona.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shweta Shah

8 Years Ago

That was the intention...!
Thanks for sharing your views about it...
Sorry about the h.. read more
Eliot Knight

8 Years Ago

your welcome!
Jerry Martin

8 Years Ago

Nicely framed! And impeccably penned!



Reviews

Loved this and your idea behind this art on display. The concept is very original and worth a thought!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like how you use the language.
"Now she can never be
Her favorite he!"
The poem had a ancient writer feel in the need and the emotion of love. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shweta Shah

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
That's my favorite line.
And because of it,I decided to end every s.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I thought it was about a lover, changing the girl's life around, accepting her as no one else would, to be honest you note caught me by surprise !
I really would like to know why the font is huge...
I like it better knowing it's about different persona.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shweta Shah

8 Years Ago

That was the intention...!
Thanks for sharing your views about it...
Sorry about the h.. read more
Eliot Knight

8 Years Ago

your welcome!
Jerry Martin

8 Years Ago

Nicely framed! And impeccably penned!
I liked your idea behind it..! But honestly at first, I thought the girl has made up an imaginary friend, then the conclusion made it a lot more clearer. Read it twice. Nice piece..!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shweta Shah

8 Years Ago

Thanks!
Thats what i wanted.The best part of poetry is to explore as many views and perceptio.. read more

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Added on July 25, 2015
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Shweta Shah
Shweta Shah

Surat, Gujarat, India



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