zero

cosmos, universe
nothing

beginning, end
nothing

ether, air
nothing

nothingness becomes
me...

Reviews

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What a rush. I like the thought of this, and it's simplicity.

[msharma]

Your nothing has proven everything .great!

[quinfinn]

this is fantastic. concise, all encompassing and deliberate. it may be short but it speaks volumes in beautiful fashion. very nice write and a pleasure to read.

[Ravyne Hawke]

ahhhh.. I so love the concept of nothingness :) it is definitely becoming :) excellent write!

[Winslow Des Totes]

Wow, for being so short the diction is strong and powerful! :D Great job! BTW I was just wondering is your name actually Siddhartha or did you pick that name after Buddha? :D (Just curious!)

[Nida Lodi]

nothingness itself contains lots of thingness in it....similarly the entire mathematical concept of universe is nothing without zero...
zero exists therefore mathematics exist...nothing exists therefore everything exists....:-)

[Sel Whiteley]

Powerful this feeling of nothingness which defines the univese. Using short, succinct lines and the omission of the full-stop has really helped to reinforce your message.

[arbitrary jane]

appreciating the dual meaning of the word 'becomes'.

[Nothing Personal]

defined zero well. dark matter, empty spaces and its vastness is boundless, so why are we something?