summer

summer

A Poem by Siddhartha

the coarse summer rains
cut my skin

the harsh summer winds
scald my lips

the cruel summer rays
blind my eyes


but you, O love,
burned
my heart



© 2011 Siddhartha



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I love this style of writing. It's just beautiful! Less is always more!

WindSong

Posted 5 Years Ago


you, oh summer love, more powerful than any element. Excellent!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow...simplistic and yet so powerful...

Posted 6 Years Ago


oH YEAH YOU ARE A POET BRAVO TOUCHING

Posted 6 Years Ago


good write


Posted 6 Years Ago


Great and strong.

Posted 6 Years Ago


good one...
harshness of love is damn unbearable....when you have love at your side everything crude to our senses seems easy to fight with...
beautifully threaded words....and apt comparison...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We give it to another and feel what they do to it,
then they give it back and it is used warn and beating
slower, it would like to stay home...
you have reached mine, well put my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm...this is precise,strong,to the point...i love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Succinct and moving - thanks so much for sharing!
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Siddhartha
Siddhartha

Hyderabad, South Asia, India



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An engineer, with a management degree, I am passionate about and fascinated by the arts – literature, movies, music and photography, et al. Creative writing, especially poetry is the raison d&rs.. more..

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