summer

the coarse summer rains
cut my skin

the harsh summer winds
scald my lips

the cruel summer rays
blind my eyes


but you, O love,
burned
my heart

Reviews

[WindSong]

I love this style of writing. It's just beautiful! Less is always more!

WindSong

[Joiedevivre]

you, oh summer love, more powerful than any element. Excellent!

[Art]

wow...simplistic and yet so powerful...

[Tate Morgan]

oH YEAH YOU ARE A POET BRAVO TOUCHING

[Aidz]

good write

[Lively]

Great and strong.

[Nida Lodi]

good one...
harshness of love is damn unbearable....when you have love at your side everything crude to our senses seems easy to fight with...
beautifully threaded words....and apt comparison...

[Rossen]

We give it to another and feel what they do to it,
then they give it back and it is used warn and beating
slower, it would like to stay home...
you have reached mine, well put my friend.

[Alicante lullaby]

hmm...this is precise,strong,to the point...i love it.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Succinct and moving - thanks so much for sharing!
Light,
Siddartha