The Last Breath

The Last Breath

A Poem by Sid

We live, we die,

Caged forever, to all we lie,

Ere the final goodbye,

After the last breath, we fly.........


© 2012 Sid



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This is an amazing write it has a great emotional flow to it. Great write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!
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Mia
Truth and wisdom. If ever there was an appropriate time to use the phrase 'short and sweet' this is it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Words of wisdom. Thank you for penning.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

Glad you like it!
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

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It made the story true and simple. I like the logic of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

Thank you!!
And there it is...the summation of life in 20 perfectly chosen words...very nicely done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
short, simple, and beutiful.........very much liked it

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

Thank you!!
simply amazing love this write

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sid

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot!!

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Added on October 18, 2012
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Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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