Tale of the tree

Its my observation for a tree

It takes so long for a tree to grow

So many years of pushing the sky

Long branches stretch their arms

Reach out with their wooden fingers

Blooming the flowers, enchanting the sky

 

 

Years drift by, fall like leaves

From green to yellow then back to green

There’s been an elm outside our ebode

It’s shadow long across our glade

Soothing the summers, cooling the air

 

 

 

When the wind passes by,

The  leaves of the tree dances in the sky

Standing tall shinning high

It’s a Exquisite gift given by thy

 

 

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is simply WOW!
What a great write it is...so thoughtful and deep and it just shows how great as a poet you are..
A very very mature piece of writing...and it is so rare because it's not very often when we reads any writing like this.
I hereby suggests you to submit it in some contest, it surely deserves an award!
Amazing work and keep writing :)

[QuietPoet]

I like it. Nice job for your second poem.

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I like this poem because you've made it seem human. Growing, touching, moody with change. Exactly how it seems. good write.