A Dangerous Mind

A Dangerous Mind

A Poem by Siddharth
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Got my brain hit by a ravishing young lady who swept me off my feet the instant I laid my sight upon her. But she just like an evil mind had me twisted and bit me to loose my red wine.

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I was smitten by a drop-dead gorgeous girl
Never I thought I would drool over her captivating curl
When she approached me for a wild acquaintance
Realized later that I was so jammy to have created a distance

One fine sundown, I bumped into her again
Did it happen by chance or just in vain?
Couldn’t get my brain indulged in an invasion
I always missed gorging wine on a beguiling occasion

Voila! I hooked myself up with her
She thought to bestow me with a murmur
I was down on my knees to propose a toast
The lass swindled me the most

I asked myself why me Oh Lord
There was an echo in the air you lacked striking a chord
Never I would take a plunge into the sea of love
Pardon me for I lost a priceless dove

© 2012 Siddharth



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What else rhymes with girl? Maybe swirl and distance doesn't even sound like it rhymes with acquaintance and it don't. Try something more like peculiar similar sounds like ending the with the "the saint is," or "the paint is." See how they tend to rhyme and distance just doesn't. Hope it was helpful, or I just thought of another "he was in a faint sense." See how fun it is. What was I thinking of, only to rhyme but I loved it when I found something that rhymed with love other than dove and hope you will too.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Siddharth

5 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Poika for your feedback. I think I have a lot to learn & grasp the basic concepts of penn.. read more



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What else rhymes with girl? Maybe swirl and distance doesn't even sound like it rhymes with acquaintance and it don't. Try something more like peculiar similar sounds like ending the with the "the saint is," or "the paint is." See how they tend to rhyme and distance just doesn't. Hope it was helpful, or I just thought of another "he was in a faint sense." See how fun it is. What was I thinking of, only to rhyme but I loved it when I found something that rhymed with love other than dove and hope you will too.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Siddharth

5 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Poika for your feedback. I think I have a lot to learn & grasp the basic concepts of penn.. read more

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Tags: Drop-dead gorgeous, gorging, swindled, striking

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Siddharth
Siddharth

New Delhi, Delhi, India



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Hey folks, I am Siddharth Sehrawat from the God's own country of India. I hold a firm passion for writing and am an ardent blogger, poet and a writer. I am sincerely awaiting the influx of that specta.. more..

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