What my eyes remember

I sit quietly 

as my eyes begin to think

of what they remember most about you

They see your face that embarrasses the sun

for the sun knows he may never be as radiant as you 

They see the smile that makes stars take a peek

before night takes a meteor shower

They see your eyelashes fall like rain

then ascend like morning as if gone with the wind

They see your hair that reminds them of gold plated fields

being swayed by the air knocked out of my being

I lose my breath

Now you know how air is made 

and why it always blows your way

It follows you like the jealous sun

While your eyes

 

Damn!

 

 

Your eyes are beautiful

 

 

Your eyes my love 

are like two love birds 

that cannot be without each other

Your eyebrows are the rainbows

of your perfect shape sculpture

They are like Michelangelo's work of art

that were engraved on your head

Your nose like Pharaohs masterpiece

buried beneath Egypt's moon

My goddess of unspoken tongue

the siren beauty song that sung

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

My goddess of unspoken tongue

the siren beauty song that sung

Beautifully written. You successfully convinced me of her beauty inside and out. :)

[Constance-Outspoken]

I disagree with Jackeline... you are not the latin lover (I've had my fill of those who call themselves such,you know), you are a Man, or at least you write like one, full of respect for the woman you love. Beautifully expressed, Orlando. Keep these coming. :)

[deadly healer]

i like this poem. its full of imagery and camparison which makes me think, which thinking is not good for me it makes my brain hurt, but i loved this poem.

[Raven Wilson]

Beautiful, great description...quite ethereal

[Jacqueline Lopez]

This is a beautiful poem, because you have a lot of amazing lines, like They see your face that embarasses the sun for the sun knows he can't be more radiant than you! Beautiful you are the latin lover!