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(Running out)

 

Another day ends slowly

More stress

More hate

I try hard

But I always fail

I’m never good enough

I try so hard

But it’s never enough

No one is happy

On person among the crowd

Only one that is happy

The only person I please

I will only let her down

I wont make it as a writer

I want to be the next world writer

I want to stand among Poe or Shakespeare

I wont even get as far as a children’s writer

I will be nothing

I will never make it in this world

What will be come of her?

I need to do well

This writing of mine…

Even this is a failure

I’m no good

I need help

I don’t think…

That I am anything  

Reviews

[Victoria Elizabeth]

very good writing!

[Sunshine]

How many times am I gonna have to have this talk with yew mister! You are a phenomenal writer and I think if you try hard enough and set your mind to it, that you can do anything. Keep pushing forward. Every great writer goes through things like you are now, and even I prefer to call it "pen depression". Depression can come from thinking you're not good enough and you never will be, but you gotta listen to your friends and believe that you can make it or you honestly never will. As it stands now, I believe you have the guts and the talent to make it among even Poe himself. Keep writing, please.

[StellaLuna]

I love your writing, don't hate yourself for it. Trust me it's really good.

[Silentnightmare ♊]

well i use a special font that was soppose to make the parenthesis wings but it doesn't seem to show up like that for people

[dead inside]

you really are a great writer, keep it up

[Doomed Hearts]

I really like this. But I have to make the comment that yew are an amazing writer. I enjoy every poem of your's I have read and think that if yew try hard enough and get your work out there. Yew can become very successful. And maybe someday. Kids in school will have to learn your name along with Shakespeare and Poe. :)

[Taylor]

I think you're a great writer....