Killed By Your Love

You need to face him everyday and it hurts badly... He does not love you anymore and behaves like there was nothing special between you both in the past.......

Was there love between us or did I just imagine it?
During those beautiful days that we spent together
My heart resembles a country thats drought hit
I guess it will remain the same forever and ever

Now everytime I see you looking at me
I feel a thousand knives piercing my heart
Everytime you talk like this was all meant to be
I feel you knew of this right from the start

You took me to a magical place and deserted me in that maze
I was on my own when I had to find my way
Now the entire world mocks at me with disgrace
I donot know why I have nothing in return to say

This pain is overbearing and it brings no bliss
To withstand it I need some strength from above
I know the only remedy to all of this
Thats why all that I now want is to be killed by your love.........

Author's Note

This was written for a contest... Hope the feeling is conveyed,,,,,, any suggestions about improvement in style or language or anything else is most welcome....

Reviews

[Ecros Lathes]

I like it it is a good poem and it explains so much. Like the pain and sorrow of a break up that went really bad. Keep it up.