Dawn Good-byes

Dawn Good-byes

A Poem by Silvia - Scribo, Ergo Sum!


© 2009 Silvia - Scribo, Ergo Sum!

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nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE"

Posted 7 Years Ago

"The moon no more awake, the sun not yet arise" - A long but 'plausable expression.

"Then you slip away from my embrace and take the blanket of my longing with you" - Awesome description of the parting of lovers. Though they're apart, they long for each other and you brilliantly out it as the two being in a blanket (of thought).

The last stanza felt like the ending of an old love movie, the sad sort. In all ways, the last stanza is a perfect envoy to ballades (Of course if the form is edited to match the rules).

A great write, Keep writing.

[This is the review that's gonna get me the '1500+ points' badge and I'm gonna add it to my library and give it a 100.]

Posted 8 Years Ago

oh, the longing is so palpable. . . I felt the whisper on the wind

Posted 9 Years Ago

Both a lovely poem and graphic. Are you on Facebook at all?

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wait for the morning dove, until then, the night is ours. lol just enchantingly beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on January 4, 2009


Silvia - Scribo, Ergo Sum!
Silvia - Scribo, Ergo Sum!


ACHTUNG! Fair warning!!!!!! Sorry, folks .... I tried. I really did ....to start spending time here, to start writing and reading here again ... But I simply couldnt bring back the old spirit o.. more..


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