Heal

Heal

A Poem by Simple Melody ♡
"

Some people enjoy the terrors and feelings that life has to offer.

"
I cannot heal a heart
that enjoys the sorrows
that it brings.

I cannot heal a soul
that rips itself 
to pieces on purpose.

I cannot heal a mind
that delves into 
shame at any chance they have.

With all that it is in me
i desire to heal the hurting
but the hurting desire
to remain shattered.

I am not a healer but only someone who desires to help.

© 2017 Simple Melody ♡



Author's Note

Simple Melody ♡
I'm not quite sure why i wrote this but to a degree i think its relevant to society. If you need help please reach out. Don't drown in your sorrows. I'm always here to help! - Melody x

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This is too good....a wonderful write and also relatable....keep going!👍

Posted 5 Months Ago


What struck me more than your poem is your Note.....
You are really a wonderful person, Melody.....

Posted 5 Months Ago


This is great, well done :D

Posted 5 Months Ago


A warm and inviting message... reminding that we are not magicians but that we can reach people with compassion and open arms

Posted 5 Months Ago


lovely piece... keep wrting

Posted 5 Months Ago


Very deep and thoughtful. I totally liked it a lot.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Simple Melody ♡

5 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

You're welcome.
well i guess someone that will talk to you would be a great assert

Posted 5 Months Ago


Simple Melody ♡

5 Months Ago

what exactly do you mean by that?
 wordman

5 Months Ago

having a shoulder to lean on,and yu seem to offer that
It is a lovely piece. If I may make a suggestion, to keep your poem in the same tense as the rest of it I would change they have to it has in this line, "I cannot heal a mind
that delves into
shame at any chance they have."

As for why you wrote it, sometimes, things just bear on our minds, and the words just come. Kudos to you for wanting to reach out to help someone else. So few like you in the world today.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Simple Melody ♡

5 Months Ago

Thank you! :) always here to help and I'll take what you said into consideration!
SJ Mullins

5 Months Ago

You're welcome. :) If you find anything in my poetry you think would make it a better read, feel fr.. read more

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Simple Melody ♡
Simple Melody ♡

Melbourne, Australia



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Young aspiring poet. ♡ Haiku lover ♡ "We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is fille.. more..

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