January

January

A Poem by z.chéri
"

New beginnings

"

                                                 January came
like a severe blizzard and

                            I stay crestf
                                    al
                                           l
            en.
  

© 2017 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
I tried to put my haiku into a more interesting form. Hope you like it! - Melody x

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I like it. It's modern and creative Melody.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Good try
haiku is good, Melody.

Posted 6 Years Ago


looked creative to me,and the haiku was right on
what more could you want

Posted 6 Years Ago


Experimental ? nice try. Haiku genius Queen.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Woah! I really liked the haiku as there were different emotions and feelings placed in like sadness, despair and dissapointment, and the form made it more engaging!
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


wonderfully done....keep going dear.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on August 24, 2017
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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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