Forever Ago

Forever Ago

A Poem by z.chéri
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It never worked.

"
Forever ago
I laid under the sun so
I could shine like you.

© 2017 z.chéri


Author's Note

z.chéri
Met a cool person this weekend who loves and writes poetry. :) - Melody x

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this conjures up my childhood
I know you probably didn't write about childhood but you probably wrote about a lover
this conjures up me lying on the beach next to my sister who tanned so well, I didn't tan I burnt
good poem short but sweet does it

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is sooo sweet , i loved how it short and effective :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


but instead i got all brown,well after the red went away

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow. Perfectly written, nice words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


z.chéri

6 Years Ago

You're very kind. Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on December 3, 2017
Last Updated on December 3, 2017
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z.chéri
z.chéri

Melbourne, Australia



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